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Old Nov 15, 2010 | 10:14 pm
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Originally Posted by txboris
LOL on the mashup.

Gotta give you a thumbs down on the Haiku. Remember, Haiku is three lines with a specific number of "on" (or "ons") per line. An on is a syllable; the syntax/form is three lines, of 5, 7, 5 on(s)/syllables.

Come on, you can do it.
Not after a few glasses of wine, I can't (which is why I had deleted it...)
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