Question regarding Hotel Loyalty Programs
#8
Join Date: May 2009
Location: ATL
Programs: DL PM, HH Diamond
Posts: 260
Not to be overly critical, but if this is for a master's thesis, I would suggest you proofread your work.
- Several of the questions were vague.
- The use of possessives were incorrect.
- You had several typos.
#9
Join Date: Feb 2001
Location: Washington DC USA
Posts: 2,571
Ditto. I could not even figure out what some of the questions meant. I suggest you rewrite the survey so that the questions are worded more strongly and clearly. While you're at it, have them correct the grammatical errors. You're on a university campus; I'm sure you can find a friendly English major to help out! Best of luck.
#10
Original Poster
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 24
Some corrections have been made and questions have been removed. The context of the questions remain the same.
All questions are linked to previous research and others are linked to hypothesis in the paper.
Thank you,
p.s. I am looking for an English major.
All questions are linked to previous research and others are linked to hypothesis in the paper.
Thank you,
p.s. I am looking for an English major.
#14
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: PHL
Programs: US Plat; AA; DL
Posts: 182
#15
Original Poster
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 24
I would have loved to offer each person 1,000 HH, Starwood, IHG, etc.. points for filling in the questionnaire. I would have reached my target in an hour or two.
PS If any one at Hilton, Starwood, IHG, Hyatt, Wyndham, or any other hotel groups reads this, I would be happy to arrange such a deal.
PS If any one at Hilton, Starwood, IHG, Hyatt, Wyndham, or any other hotel groups reads this, I would be happy to arrange such a deal.



