Dear jburns513,
Thank you for your time and participation in my survey. I am sorry to hear that you found the readability of my survey to be ungrammatical and sloppy. Actually this survey was designed by adopting survey questions from prior academic studies that were confirmed to be valid and reliable. I understand that academic surveys can be too technical sometimes. If you could give me some suggestions to further improve the survey, as other FTers above have done, it will be much appreciated. Thank you.