Originally Posted by
2rhalleron
Its hard to explain my exact plan without my research proposal and explaining my methodology & lit review. Ive wrote 10,000 words already and it's a bit disheartening when your told it lacks structure 5 weeks before the deadline, when you've been given positive feedback from an academic since Oct. As my degree is on management, it focuses on how managers manage strategic change and when they see fit to change strategy based on PESTEL factors.
Please don't be disheartened. Nobody here knows whether or not your dissertation lacks structure because we haven't seen it or your research proposal.
It's just that it is hard to provide quality answers in the abstract and people here will generally be able to respond with more useful information if they have more specific questions to focus on. Could you perhaps refine your questions with just a limited part of the thesis in mind, or a particular recent example or airline failure/evolution/merger similar to the ones you have mentioned?