<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Originally posted by jer:
I disagree. I found the writing lucid and compelling, with a powerful grasp of the evidence and a well reasoned conclusion. While the middle sections wander a bit, as a whole it hangs together nicely.
I'd give it an A-</font>
I am sorry. A- is not a valid mark.
Student used "ubb" as an abbreviation for Ultimate Bulletin Board, so that needed to be "UBB" if abbreviated.
The double period after "Few Miles .. " was excessive and exhibitionist by a factoid of one.
C+ is surely closer to the mark?
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