Do you like the new Brazil Forum description?
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Do you like the new Brazil Forum description?
We just have had our new description for a few hours. If you want changes or have comments please make them here. The Moderators are very responsive so please make your wishes known.
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I would say that its a start... but it needs some work.
I think that a description about Brazil that does not mention the Amazon Rain Forest, and the Sunny Beaches that can be found in various regions is rather incomplete. Also, Brazil is one of the world's largest producers of footwear (its part of the big leagues together with China and India), but similar to its Soybean output, these are two traits that I would not have in the description... this is a travel site so those are probably less important facts to most.
I think that a description about Brazil that does not mention the Amazon Rain Forest, and the Sunny Beaches that can be found in various regions is rather incomplete. Also, Brazil is one of the world's largest producers of footwear (its part of the big leagues together with China and India), but similar to its Soybean output, these are two traits that I would not have in the description... this is a travel site so those are probably less important facts to most.
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One other thing... I think that the description should explicitly note that Brazil is home of the largest and most famous Carnival in the world.... Samba is mentioned in the current description but I think not in a way that is should.
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I like the emphasis on passion at the beginning. Personally I think "diversity" is key to understanding Brazil where the myriad of landscapes and peoples are fascinating. It's like a microcosm of the world and everyone should come and experience it.
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I will post a revised entry in the Suggestions Forum. Please keep helping revise this until we get it right.
I agre with those who think we're better off without these, but since we have them we can hardly have Brazil without, can we?
I agre with those who think we're better off without these, but since we have them we can hardly have Brazil without, can we?