Originally Posted by secretbunnyboy
Meanwhile, from the Not Quite Expressing What We Wanted To file:
I'm sure Reliant Security would have preferred "wandering in a cargo area" to be descibed as "on patrol"...
Ha...
Funny, my junior high english teacher used to hound on me for not placing the action next to the subject it's describing. Nice to see our newspaper editors are so sharp...at least it's better than the fact checkers at the NYT.