and if you want to know what the mistakes in it are.....

www.pedantstravelsociety.com for the grammar slaughtering of the English language trying to camp up and sound like Americans

www.spottiesevacuations.com for the errors in the text relating to exit drills.

Must dash, another set of points to earn. Sounds like a deal from the top deck to me (wot no F upgrade with miles, no, had to change booking and not enough time....)