so, something like this?

June 1 leave ny
june 2 arrive tokyo
june 3-6 tokyo fun!
june 7 leave tokyo, arrive beijing (half day in beijing)
june 8-11 beijing fun!
june 12 leave beijing arrive hong kong (half day in hongkong)
june 13-16 hong kong kowloon fun!
june 17 leave hong kong, arrive tokyo
june 18 leave for jfk

4 full days in tokyo, 4 full days in beijing, 4 full days in hong kong


that sounds better?

will i be missing out if i take out tokyo? the grand hyatt tokyo looks