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Apr 23, 2024 | 7:05 pm

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philemer

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Originally Posted by philemer

Here's the cancellation policy at the HR Maui:

72h Prior To 11:59 Pm Local Time The Day Of Arrival Or Two Night Fee/ Two Night Deposit At Booking

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This is the cancellation policy from another property and it actually makes sense b/c of better grammar:

Cancellation Policy
11:59pm Hotel Time 1 Day Before Arrival Or Pay 1 Night Fee/Credit Card Required

See the difference? First one left out the word "pay" which makes it a little bit confusing. Hyatt needs to hire someone with a English degree who knows how to write a simple sentence. Grammar rant over.

Yes, neither of them are complete sentences but the 2nd one makes more sense.

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