Originally Posted by
mapleg
No one cares (other than FT readers perhaps) it was the start of a a mini RTW and where you were connecting.
The complaint is far too wordy. Brevity is your friend. Long rambling complaints are frequently dismissed out of hand whereas a short to the point one is more likely to get attention.
To add to that 'mini-RTW' is an FT made up term. The person reading this letter will have no idea what they're talking about...they probably won't care either.