What is the comment on this run................As the first leg of my DONE4

BKK/HK/NRT/MEL/SYD/AKL/SYD/HNL/MIA( Will use up N.A. secments over the winter then in spring carry on to Europe and end up back in BKK.

Any suggestions on improvement....any comments on "you can't get there from here"

How does the above look for the AA Plat. chall.

Thank you one and all.....

TomT