I think you can get rid of the part about it changing a year ago...that's old news. Just reading what's in red should be alert enough. Here's how I would write it:
All PUBLIC Citi AAdvantage personal card links now deny bonus miles for personal card accounts if you have opened or closed any Citi AAdvantage personal (gold, platinum. exec) card in the past 24 months.
All PUBLIC Citi AAdvantage business card links now deny bonus miles for business card accounts if you have opened or closed any Citi AAdvantage business card in the past 24 months.
I think saying personal and business 3 times in each sentence should reinforce the idea, LOL.
Last edited by fredc84; Jul 15, 2017 at 6:43 am