I'm not enough of a Jakarta expert to comment, but my suggestion is that you'll get a lot more uptake if you give readers a clue what interests you. It's pointless of them suggesting a visit to the the verdant Bogor botanical gardens if what really interests you are charmingly ramshackle buildings in Old Batavia. Likewise it's pointless of them suggesting local arts and crafts boutiques if what you want to do is visit a mall to get a sense of everyday (middle-class) life in Jakarta.