Add or substract where you will, but the proposed itinerary includes too many destinations in too little time. You'll be spending way too much time checking in/out, packing/unpacking and dealing with all that can come with air travel. It's a formula for exhaustion. Slow down and get to know the places you go.

I suggest planning to spend at least three nights, or better four, at the destinations that are of greatest appeal. Catch some of the others on another trip.