LAX-HNL is all 757s now - bad, but you could instead go DFW-HNL on bigger equipment for a better F experience.

Also there's no LAS-SJD service (LAX or DFW).

Finally, why not an F segment on QF's A380? So add SIN-LHR.

Revised: TLV-LHR-NYC-MIA-LAS-LAX-SJD-DFW-HNL-HND-HKG-DPS-HKG-SIN-LHR-TLV