Originally Posted by
flymanbeast
Well i really hate when its cold the worst i agree with is maybe dc weather.
Also i really gwu however the financial aid while really good is not as good as the other schools on my list .For instance uva and vanderbilt promise 100% need based in fact i don't have income at the moment so those schools will be free for me and they would give me money to even get housing and buy foo.While gwu at best can offer up to the tution(still amazing but comparing to my other selections...)
Financial aid is based not only on the student's income, which is usually very low, but also on the family's (parents) income and savings fairly broadly defined to almost be wealth.
If you plan to study in a good university, you should work on your English grammar, spelling, punctuation, and capitalization. What you've posted here would get a very low grade and an admissions applicaiton essay of this sort would almost surely lead to rejection.