I'm enjoying this so far, looking forward to more. That is indeed a spectacular shot of Milford Sound/Mitre Peak. I've been there twice and never managed to strike weather like that - you're truly lucky.
Not so lucky with your screen in Business Premier. The older aircraft screens are noticeably poorer resolution than the schmick new 773 ones, but I've never had any problems with visibility. Is it possible someone had changed the brightness on that screen?