Originally Posted by
henkybaby
Who have enough free time to nitpick through a random email in this much detail? If that is a requirement tell me whom to mail my CV to.
I think you meant to write "to whom I should mail my CV".
I wrote my post at around midnight, having returned from a Drinks Party. @:-)
Even in that state it wasn't that hard to suggest improvements.
Normal service now resumed, please continue your race to the bottom...!