<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Originally posted by ozstamps:
Student used "ubb" as an abbreviation for Ultimate Bulletin Board, so that needed to be "UBB" if abbreviated.
The double period after "Few Miles .. " was excessive and exhibitionist by a factoid of one.
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OK, so maybe I was too generous by not deducting for the technical flaws.
Nevertheless, you can't deny that the argument is theoretically sophisticated and makes an important contribution to the literature. It will surely influence all future generations of scholars with its paradigm shifting implications ...
How about a B+?