Originally Posted by
totti
It's actually a very long list... While I do not have a problem with the general idea behind this description as pointed out by Flying Lawyer I would suggest to reduce the length of description. Or does anybody acutally keep on reading after lets day 'Oktoberfest'?
Personally, I'd prefer a more positive and direct description with some things you can discover or experience in Germany beside cliche.
Fully agree!
Maybe something like "Apart from the very well known cliches like Oktoberfest and sausages, modern Germany stands for ..... (you name it) and therefor is attractive to both leisure and business travelers.